The first draft

My email to Clive:
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Dear Clive,
This is my first draft.
I plan to finish my proposal in week 2 of October so then I can focus
on the marine scientific research.

thanks,
Andi
PS. How was your discussion with Chris about the CARIS training?
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Clive's response:
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Thanks Andi,

Looks like we're a "go" to organise our Caris training week.
Will look at your draft this week.

Clive
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