Clive's response to my proposal

Clive, my Co-supervisor from IBRU, said "I can understand you proposal in term of technical aspects. It is very clear to me but I need to suggest some correction to make your words sound more English :) In general, it is a very impressive start. I understand that English is not your mother tongue, It's OK!"

Clive made some corrections in term of grammar and special terms usage. He pointed out on some particular issues such as why maritime boundary is essential, while many coastal states can gain acces to marine resources without delimiting their maritime boundary.
I need to add some elaboration concerning this particular issue and also put some additional references. I hope I can finish everything before week 2 of October.